Thursday, June 14, 2007

Saree Pavasaachya ........

Its been a long time since i updated my blog. From last 2-3 months I was busy with my Sister's wedding ceremony planning and all... Lately I got busy with the work in office. There are 2-3 posts on which I am working from last few days but every time I start working on it, get stuck somewhere or with something.
Yesterday, while chatting with a friend, she told me that once again i am retreating from my blogging habit. I told her about my posts plans, you can expect some real good photos in coming few weeks as monsoon is coming closer. I love Rains, this season makes me introvert when I spend time for myself, thinking about many different things ranging from Friends to Love :-)
While discussing with her, few thoughts came to my mind about the effect of this season on Lovers. Few days back in office, during a coffee break One of my friend got senti when we started discussion of about individual experiences during Monsoon... So I decided to write a poem and completed the same in one night. Do read it and let me know your feedback .....


सरी पावसाच्या ....

पावसाच्या सरीन मातीला नवा सुगन्ध येतो
नव्या त्या ऋतुला नवीन रंग देतो

नवी पालवी, नवा तो फुलोरा,
नव्या त्या ऋतुचा नव तो चेहरा

सरी कोसळतात पाषाण पिघळतात
मनात ही मग एक नवीन खेळ सुरु होतो

प्रियकराच्या मनाला मग मिळतो नवीन श्वास,
नव्या त्या सखे संग, नवीन एक वाट

नव्या त्या वाटे वर उमलतात नव प्रेमान्कुर,
गन्ध ज्याचा करतो मोहीत प्रेमवेड्यास

वाट सजते त्या नवीन रंगानी अन गन्धानी,
प्रियकरासंग वाट पाहते ती वाट प्रेमीकेची

...मनोदीप

19 comments:

smita said...

sahiiii,
Tu marathi kavita pan karto...this is new for me.

Manodeep said...

@ Smita :
Lanugage is just a medium of communication. I have written few english as well but those are totally personal and not for the blog :-)

Prasad said...

I guess your source of motivation was me :-)

Anyways, this was really awesome which brought many poignant memories back in my mind.

S H O N said...

Good one. Pahilya pawasachya Shubhechchha.

Ritesh Dhore said...

Good Manu,

kavita is very good.
i think now you are Big enough to get Engageeeee with some one :-)

Rajesh said...

Nice poem .Good going Manodeep. By any chance did you manage to get wet in the rains ?

Yogesh said...

Sahi ahe.... keep it up...

Rajesh said...

Awesome re .. tu ani kavita .... mhanje thodasa navalach aahe ... anyways .. its a good poem. Very well written, and deep with feeling. Kidhar se itna inspiration mila re ?

Abhishek Kulkarni said...

Hi all,

Even though I know manya since a long time... I really didn't know that he is a good poet..

Mast re Manya... Keep it up....

I would like to sing one of your good creations...

Manodeep said...

@ Prasad :
Hey ya its you, that day you were standing all alone in a corner on when it was raining ;)
But its someone else who provided me the right tool to complete it :P

@ shon :
Thanks a lot :)

@ Ritesh :
You don't worry about that, if you would followed the same rule then teri ab tak 5-6 engagement to jarur hoti thi

@ Abhishek K :
Sure dude, one day I will come up with something more creative

vaishali said...

Hey Its GR8....are tu marathi kavita lihito this is really good thing. reading habit aahe vatat...
Really nice poem. Kepp it up...

yogesh kathalkar said...

khupach chaan kavita lihili aahes.

Aniket said...

Aawadli.. marathi madhye aahe mhanun jaasti aawadli. Bhavna lagech pohochlya.
Keep writing nice stuff.. writing something textual as well ..

I am said...

plz translate it for me.. X-(

Ashish said...

Hey damn god poem... keep it up man...
and do tell me once you give birth to one more poem

Dagny said...

Lovely poem!
:)
I always admire ppl who can write marathi poems.... somehow i cant compose in marathi and its a shame that i cant express myself so well in my mother tongue
:)
Kudos to you tho mannu!

Here s one post about rains I had written long ago....
:)
http://thetaggartterminal.blogspot.com/2006/07/when-it-poured-that-night.html#links

RASHMI said...

Hi manodeep
Nice Poem
ani ho ata ya "pavasacnchya sarincha"Manosokt anand lutun tyache fotos amhala dakhava.

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